Friday, July 25, 2025

"When Time Stood Still"

I'm not entirely sure of my transcription, but I think the second verse of "When Time Stood Still" is:
Sitting there inside your mind
Just waiting for the clock to chime
In a lonely line
Stood a lonely man
There are two poetic features here that heighten this sense of loneliness.

The verse is held together by assonance more than rhyme (the long i in "mind," "chime," and "line"), but this sound is lacking in the final line ("Stood a lonely man"), illustrating how this man is separate.

The phrase "lonely line" alliterates, and because the two words start with the same sound, there's a sense of this singularity.